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coming back to italki! During my absense from italki,I decided the university I want to enter! I'm 10th grede student now,it means that I have about 2 years to study for universitys' entrance exams. Lately I'm studying hard to achieve the hope.

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Coming back to italki!

 

(예은さんの訂正は正しいですが、ぼくも英語を少し変わってあげると思います!)

 

During my absense from italki, I've decided the university that I want to go to (in the future)! [<-将来のことです。] 

I'm a 10th greade student now which means that I have about 2 more years to study for the university's entrance exams. 
Lately I'm studying hard in order to fulfill my dream / so that I can reach my goal.

 

いいね!一所懸命勉強しなければなりませんね!英語もすごかったです。ところで、あなたが選べた大学の名前は何ですか?これからも頑張ってくださいね。

m(^ ^)m

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Coming back to italki!

During my absense from italki,_I decided the university I want to enter!
I'm a 10th grede grade student now,it means meaning that I have about 2 years to study for the universitys' university's entrance exams.
Lately I'm studying hard to achieve themy hopeDream.

 

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Good luck achieving your goal!

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coming back to italki!

During my absense from italki,I decided the university I want to enter!
I'm 10th grede student now,it means that I have about 2 years to study for universitys' entrance exams.
Lately I'm studying hard to achieve the hope.

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Coming back to italki!

During my absense from italki, I have chosen the university, I want to enter!
Currently I'm a 10th grade student, which means that I have around 2 years to prepare for university's entrance exams.
Lately I'm studying very hard to pursue my dream university. 

P.S.
Wish you all the best in applying to university! Never give up. 

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