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my home town my hometown is a very small city ,located in the north of yangzhou ,Jiangsu Province . And i had been living there many years before i went to university ,so i am extaordinary familiar with my home town ,even every narrow and old streets . As a child ,i always admired the life of large city where many mordern building and colorful acitivity ,unlike my poor hometown ,a simple and dull life ,even meet the old acquintances every time when go shopping with my mother ,and we were forced to study all the time at that time .And now think it was so heartless when i would leave that smll city for university.However ,i miss the simple life in hometown now after several years living out ,i feel the impersonal emotion among the concrete modern buildings .

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My home town

My hometown is a very small city, located in the north of Yangzhou, Jiangsu Province. And i   I had been living lived there for many years before i I went to University, so i I am extaordinary extremely familiar with my home town, even every narrow and old street.s .
As a child, I always admired the life of large city where many modern mordern buildings and colorful acitivity were,unlike my poor hometown, a simple and dull life. Even meeting the old acquintances every time when I go shopping with my mother and we were forced to study all the time at that time. .And I now think it was so heartless when I left i would leave that small smll city for University.However, I ,i miss the simple life in my hometown now after several years living away. I out ,i feel the impersonal emotion among the concrete modern buildings. .


You could use 'extraordinarly familiar' but does not sound natural given the context. It can work though 'extremely' is a much better word, I think.

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