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Truth or Dare, Do or Die Hello. My name is Claire. I'm writing this notebook entry to share a short story about Love, rejection and moving on. Please do correct my wrong grammars and spellings. Thank you and Happy Reading :) Kim Wayler, A loving, charming, jolly and chubby 16 years old girl. Gian Tan, a charming, chinito, tall and handsome 17 years old boy. Kim first met Gian in a social gathering, Kim was 12 years old while Gian was 13 years old then. Kim was small and innocent and doesn't really have any idea about love. The two became really close after meeting and talking to each other, it seemed like they have alot in common. Kim became really close with Gian that came a point where the two can't get enough with each other, they can't separated. Kim was very happy, so was Gian. As the years go by, Kims feelings for Gian changed from Friendship to Love. as their Friendship grew, so is kims confused feelings for Gian.. To Be continued <3

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Truth or Dare, Do or Die

Hello. My name is Claire. I'm writing this notebook entry to share a short story about Love, rejection and moving on. Please do correct my wrong grammars and spellings. Thank you and Happy Reading :)







Kim Wayler - a loving, charming, jolly and chubby 16 year-old girl.
Gian Tan - a charming, chinito, tall and handsome 17 year-old boy.

Kim first met Gian in at a social gathering,. Kim was 12 years old while Gian was 13. years old then. Kim was small and innocent and doesn't didn't really have any idea about love. The two became really close after meeting and talking to each other. It seemed like they have had alot a lot in common. Kim became really close with to Gian that and there came a point where the two can't couldn't get enough with of each other; they can't couldn't be separated (they became inseparable). Kim was very happy. So was Gian.
As the years go went by, Kim's feelings for Gian changed from friendship to love. As their Friendship grew, so is did Kim's confused feelings for Gian..



To Be continued <3

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