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My last italian trip I have taken advantage of my last little holidays because I have visited a very interesting part of Italy. I had already been in Italy before, but this time, I have could know a new spot on the map and sights that I didn't know. Have you ever visited Italy? I only can recomend this country for you. Go on! what's waiting you for? This time, I could taste its special cheese called parmesano. If you love the cheese, this is a perfect place for you because you can have a glass of white wine while you taste strong cheese. Cheese is present by everywhere. You can find it in the pizzas, or in the normal pasta dish, or in its aperitifs. Really, I don't know how you can live there if you hate the cheese! This time, I have travelled to Bolonia. It's a medium- high size city. I have been terribly fascinated with its windows. I know this is dull thing, but when I saw a beauty italian window, I had to take a photograph. It was imposible don't take this photo! So, I have a big photo collection of italian windows. It's realy strange, don't believe? I am charmed too with the house walls because it had brilliant colours and each house had a different colour. So you could go over a special sights of the city. If you will go to visit Italy, you would need a good camera to take several photos, a good shoes to walk all its streets and all time you can take to know special and unknown sights. I hope you enjoy so much as I have enjoyed.

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Miguel, Your english is very advanced; I switched the order of a few words and eliminated some words that may be unnecessary, reduced exclamation points so your reader feels your excitement without any unintentional anger. I changed colour to colour as I believe you are learning US English not UK English. Good Job, John
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My last Italian Trip

 

I have taken advantage of my last holidays to visit a very interesting part of Italy. I had already been to Italy before, but this time, I wanted to see new sights. Have you ever visited Italy? I can only recomend this country for you. Go on! What are you waiting for.

 

 I could taste it's special cheese called parmesano. If you love the cheese, this is a perfect place for you because you can have a glass of white wine while you taste strong cheese. Cheese is everywhere. You can find it in  pizza, or in a pasta dish, or in its aperitifs. Really, I don't know how you can live there if you hate the cheese!

This time, I have travelled to Bologna. It's a medium sized city. I have been terribly fascinated with its windows. I know this is dull thing, but when I saw a beautiful italian window, I had to take a photograph. It was imposible not take this photo. I have a big photo collection of italian windows. It's really strange, isn't it?

I am too charmed with the house walls because it had brilliant colors and each house had a different color. So you could go over special sights of the city.

If you go to visit Italy, you would need a good camera to take several photos, good shoes to walk all its streets and all the time you can take to know special and unknown sights. I hope you enjoy it as much as I have.

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