Translation

Many people consider (considered) a university to be (as) a place where students can flourish (try their best.) Many students can profit from theoretical studies, amassing (learn a lot of) professional knowledge in preparation (in theory study indeed to prepare)  for a (the) future job. However, a (the) more effective way would be (is) to connect (connact) theory with fact. As a result, I believe it is very important for students, universities and, indeed the whole of society, to have a means of preparing candidates for their working life. (class of jobs before they have their first job for students, universities and even for the whole society. )
Obviously, the school is not only a place where students can learn knowledge from books, but also a place which can help us develop our personalities and guide the direction of our future work. A class focusing on jobs and prospects for our future employment (The preparing class of jobs) could (can) help us (choose our jobs) a lot, so I think that our university should pay more attention to (on) it.

很多人将大学看做是学生们在学习上竭尽全力的地方。确实很多学生将会在理论学习上得到非常专业的知识，这将为未来的工作做准备。但是，其实更有效的方式是将理论联系实际，（因此，让人们）有第一份工作之前，先上一个工作预备班让学生、大学甚至整个社会在是非常的重要。
很显然，学校不仅仅是一个教授我们书本上知识的地方，而且还是一个帮助我们塑造自己的性格、和指引我们未来方向的地方。工作预备课程对我们未来的职业选择有帮助，大学应该对此给予充分的关注。

Good thinking and written well.