About me
Long time to visit the Website ITALKI.
I do not have to write anything for this topic, I hope that I can improve my writing skills better after posting entry. I will begin with events which are going to happen or happened. Today is my sister's birthday, I got up early and prepared a gift to offer her. This gift is a scarf which I spent a month to knit. My sister was amazed about this gift and sent a lovely messege to thanks me. Now, she is hanging out with her friends, maybe enjoy a delicious meal or a cup of coffee in cafe shop.
Moving another topic, I am going to mention about my house where I live, We live in a small house near Red river, if I am not mistaken, my family live here more than 11 years when I was a little girl. My neighbourhood is really good. The atmosphere is clean and peaceful, I can enjoy fresh air with light flavor. we have a small garden with a lot of flowers such as roses, daisies and other flowers. When I am sad as well as happy, I often go there to relax myself or even seeing many kind of flowers. This garden have benefits: children can play game, young people may walk a long or with their dog, senior citizen may play chess. It is really a good play to develop my community and enhance social skills for everyone. I do not want to move into another place since It bring me many useful things and laught. If I have a chance to study oversea, I certainly miss this place so much.
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About me
Long time to visit the Website ITALKI.
I do not have anything to write about for this topic, I hope that I can improve my writing skills better after posting this entry. I will begin with events which are going to happen or happened. Today is my sister's birthday, I got up early and prepared a gift to offer give to her. This gift is a scarf which I spent a month knitting. My sister was amazed about this gift and sent a lovely message to thanks me. Now, she is hanging out with her friends, maybe enjoying a delicious meal or a cup of coffee in cafe shop.
Moving on another topic, I am going to mention about my house where I live, We live in a small house near Red river. If I am not mistaken, my family has lived here for more than 11 years. Since I was a little girl. My neighbourhood is really good. The atmosphere is clean and peaceful, I can enjoy the fresh air with light flavor. we have a small garden with a lot of flowers such as roses, daisies and other flowers. When I am sad as well as happy, I often go there to relax myself or just to see many kind of flowers. This garden have many benefits: children can play games, young people may walk a long or with their dog, senior citizen may play chess. It is really a good place to develop my community for people to get along with each other and enhance social skills for everyone. I do not want to move into another place since It has brought me many useful things and laughs. If I have a chance to study oversea, I will certainly miss this place so much.
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Thanks for your advice, I also get many errors, I need to improve and review my grammar.
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Start smaller. You are still making too many errors and the text is very long. Correcting everything would take long and would not be very helpful, since you are making a lot of fundamental mistakes. My advice is to ask questions about smaller portions of text and to get back to the basics of english grammar. I hope you find my comment useful. Have a nice day:)
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