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Resume
Hi! My name is Nuria Morillo and I'm a journalist. I have been working in a newspaper El Mundo, radio channel COPE and television channels Telefive and Spanish Television(when you use have been working you must specify time period like for 5years or since 1994). In all od them I make a During all that time I made a lot of information about the news,(here no need to use about the news) in my youtube channel Nuria Morillo, you could see a little piece of my job.
I studied in Seville's University, the Univesity Degree of Journalism, and then I moved on to Madrid to complete my studies with in Masters of Television Journalism.
Like as you can see I have a good english level, am good at english but it isn't the only language I learn and I even learnt a little bit french.
Now it's is your turn, I want to work with you soon. Thanks
Resume
Hi! My name is Nuria Morillo and I'm a journalist. I have been working worked in a for the newspaper El Mundo, radio channel COPE and television channels Telefive and Spanish Television. In all of them I make a information about reported the news. In my youtube channel, Nuria Morillo, you could can see a little piece of my job what I do.
I studied in Seville's University, where I received a Bachelor's the Univesity degree of in Journalism, and then I moved on to Madrid to complete my studies with a Masters of Television Journalism.
Like As you can see, I have a am good with English level. But it isn't my lonly language as I also know learnes a little bit of french.
Now it is your turn. I want to work look forward to working with you soon. Thanks.
("I look forward to working with you," is an extremely common English phrase at the end of a professional letter.)
Great work, Nuria! What you wrote was really good. I was a little hard on you, though, because you are a journalist and journalists are held to a different standard. (I have a certificate in Broadcast Journalism, too, from UCLA, University of California Los Angeles.)
Keep up the good work.
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