My first english composition Good moring , this is my first english composition , I am studying english now, and I want to improve my english . ^_^Maybe I can help you with chinese .

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My first English composition

Good morning , this is my first English composition , I am studying English now, and I want to improve my English . ^_^Maybe I can help you with learning Chinese .

Capital errors; All languages should be written with a capital.
Vocabulary error; Don't know if this is typo, but it should be morning.

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