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First notes about sights in Azerbaijan My first notes about sights in Azerbsijan be the Maiden Tower.The tower has been built in 12 century.In 18-19 century the Maiden tower was used as a beacon.There are many legends about the Maiden's tower,one of them is related to the origin of the name.According to legend rich girl's father did't want to marry a poor boy.She wanted to marry unloved,and she decided that it 's better to die and jumped from the tower.Thus came the name the Maiden tower.

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First notes about sights in Azerbaijan

My first notes about sights in Azerbaijan are about the Maiden Tower. The tower was built in the 12th century. In the 18-19 centuries the Maiden tower was used as a beacon. There are many legends about the Maiden's tower, one of them is related to the origin of the name. According to legend, a rich girl's father didn't want her to marry a poor boy. She didn't wanted to marry someone she didn't love, so she decided that it was (or "would be") better to die, and jumped from the tower. Thus came the name the Maiden tower.

 

Your English is great, excellent use of the passive voice. I love reading such legends from different countries -- I wonder if the Maiden Tower is haunted.

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