Thank to all people who wants help me =)

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• explain what is wrong with the furniture
• say what action you would like the landlord to take



Dear Mister White,

 
I am Sandra Albornoz , I am the renter of the flat on 5th street.  I would have liked to write in other situation have written this under different circumstances, but it is needed and well I have I need to confess something. I felt so deceived so that you have offered something one thing to me and I am receiving something completely different.

The offering ad says “we rent flats fully furnished ….. .” That’s why I phoned you and we took the flat according to the contract.  We were going to take promised a flat with their rooms with desks, beds and bed side tables. I found all of that, but everything is dirty, dented and stained . I want to think it was a mister white‘s just a mistake so he you will solve this inconvenience.

My family and I really like this place and its location. It is the closest place according to our needs close to everything we need.  It would will be our home for all the time that we must spend in the UK and as you know we have signed for six months , but we may be here at least two years mean while I am taking completing my postgraduate program .

We’d appreciate your concern/consideration and the soonest resolution.  We would like you to change/replace all the spoilt damaged and dirty furniture; I am not saying you have to buy everything new , just the spoilt ones , please replace the unsuitable pieces.

Thanks

Good job.  Watch out for run-on sentences.  One note- I think spoiled/spoilt is used for organic substances, like "spoiled food."

Thank to all people who wants help me =)

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• explain what is wrong with the furniture
• say what action you would like the landlord to take



Dear mister white
I am Sandra Albornoz , I am the renter of the flat on 5th street , I would have liked to write in other situation , but it is needed and well I have to confess . I felt deceived so you have offered something to me and I am receiving something completely different.

The offering says “we rent flats fully furnished ….. .” That’s why I phoned you and we took the flat ,according to the contract , we were going to take a flat with their rooms with desk , bed and bed side table . I found all of that ,but everything is dirty, dented and stained . I wantED to think “it was Mister White‘s mistake” so he will solve this inconvenience.

My family and I really like this place and its location , It is the closest place according to our needs , it would be our home, all the time that we must spend in the UK and as you know we have signed for six months , but we may be here at least two years mean while I am taking my postgraduate program .

We’d appreciate your concern and the soonest solution, we would like to change all the spoilt furniture, I am not saying you have to buy everything new , just the spoilt ones ,
Thanks