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make international friendship I open my wallet find no money I open my pocket find no coin I open my life find you then I know how rich I am Forever my friend Happy Thanks Giving Day

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I would write the title something like this:

 

Forming International Friends

 

The content:

 

I searched in my wallet and found no money

I searched in my pocket and found no coins

But when I searched in my life

I found you

Then I realise how rich I was

To have you as a friend

Forever

 

Happy Thanksgiving Day

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Zhangqiang,

Here is how I would write it.

 

 

International friendship

I opened my wallet and found no money
I opened my pocket to find no coins 
I opened my life to find you
Then I knew how rich I was 
to have you as a friend forever
Happy Thanks Giving Day

 If you want to take classes with me in English please go to my teacher page and sign up.  I will help you with the English.  Thank you, Vicky Rivera

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wow, so sweet 认识 你我很高兴 19
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Good poem.

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