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You can correct my text Is my second day in Italki and graithung of my life. I'm a boy, i have 22 years and live in Colombia, i have two broder and a sister. I'm student in the University of Magdalena. I love potography and adventure. Thanks for you help.

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Is my second day in Italki --> This is my second day in Italki

and graithung of my life. --> No entiendo. Quiere decir «¿esto es un sumarío de mi vida?» Here is a summary of my life.


I'm a boy, --> Gramatically correct. But if you are 22 you are "a man."

i have 22 years --> "I'm 22," or "I'm 22 years old" or (very formal) "I'm 22 years of age."

and live in Colombia. --> End the sentence and use a period.

I have two broder -->  brother

and a sister.

I'm a student  in at the University of Magdalena. I love photography and adventure. 

 

Lo siento que la ortografia de inglés, es dificíl para hablantes nativos de inglés. Unas palabras con herencia de griego tiene «ph» y es pronunciada al mismo que «f». Ejemplos: photograph, Philadelphia (ciudad), physics (ciencia), telephone.

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You can correct my text

This is Is my second day in Italki and graithung(?) of my life.

I'm a boy, i have  am 22 years old and live in Colombia, i have two broder brothers and a sister. I'm student in the University of Magdalena. I love potography and adventure.

Thanks for you help.

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No suele llamársele "boy" a un joven de 22 años, y un joven de esa edad ciertamente no se refiere a sí mismo como un "boy". (Hay excepciones a la regla general; por ej., sus padres y abuelos siempre usarán la palabra "boy" para usted). Entonces sería mejor decir, "I'm a man (young man) (male) (guy), and I live in Colombia."
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Thank you for correcting my note. I made some corrections to your note and I would love to practice!

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