would you do me a favor to correct this two-minute speech?

Good evening, everyone, how are you today ?
This is really a great honor to have this opportunity, and I hope I can interest you in what I have to say believe I can make good performance today. My name is Chen Jiaqi, but friends Besides, you can call me Jojo - J stands for jocular and O stands for optimistic. People describe me as a lively, talkative and energetic person. I’m a lively outgoing girl, but who always holds a motto in my mind, 'genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration'.

Therefore, I want to raise talk about a topic which is also relatedive to my faith/beliefs. I always firmly believe that chance alone can’t achieve succeed without ability. Seeing from the way to success, we have to set a goal initially, and through the personal ability, we can hold grasp our opportunities the chance and achieve to success. A wise man would rather be capable to open a door for himself when he faces up to the same chance with as others in the fierce social competition. Only the people who have the excellent ability can seize the chance and succeed best of all possibly. I still believe a good horse will meet the talent scout as to gold will shine anywhere. Only when you obtain are given special abilities can you expect to catch the chance precisely. There is an ancient song, 'heaven fell down on sister Lin, but trust me, chance will not drop from the sky'. Effort often creates chance, so I consider that ability matters to in seizing a chance.

would you do me a favor to correct this two-minute speech?

Good evening, everyone, how are you today ?
This is really a great honor to have this opportunity, and I believe I can make good performance today. My name is Chen Jiaqi.You can call me Jojo. J stands for jocular and O stands for optimistic. People describe me as a lovely, talkative and energetic person. I’m a lively girl, but I always hold a motto in my mind, Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration. Therefore, I want to raise a topic which is also relative to my faith. I always firmly believe that chance can’t be achieve without ability. Seeing from the way to success, we have to set a goal initially, and through the person's ability, we can hold the chance and achieve success. A wise man would rather be capable to open a door for himself when he faces up to the same chance with others in the fierce social competition. Only the people who have excellent ability can seize the chance and succeed. I still believe a good horse will meet the talent scout as to gold will shine anywhere. Only when you obtain special abilities can you expect to catch the chance precisely. There is an ancient song, heaven fell down a sister Lin, but trust me, chance will not drop from the sky. Effort often creates chance ,so I consider that ability is important to have the chance.