The enormous mountains.
Today,I climbed a mountain in Odaigahara in Nara with my friend.We drove to go to the climbing road.And we walked to reach top of the mountain.When I saw the view of top of mountain I felt great nature and said fantastic.It's surrounded other mountains.But the mountain is very high.So we could see the whole mountains May be It was greatest moment in my life.I'm happy now.Cause my friend said thank you to me with best her smile.
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The enormous mountains.
Today, I climbed a mountain in Odaigahara in Nara district, together with my friend. We drove to get to the climbing path road, and then we walked to reach the top of the mountain. When I saw the view of from the top of mountain I felt the wonder of nature /how great nature is and said 'fantastic!'. It's surrounded by other mountains, but this mountain/peak is very high/the highest, so we could see all the whole surrounding mountains. Maybe it was is greatest moment in my life so far. I'm happy now, because my friend said thank you to me with her best her smile.
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The enormous mountains.
Today,I climbed a mountain in Odaigahara in Nara with my friend.We drove to go to the climbing road.And we walked to reach the top of the mountain.When I saw the view from the of top of the mountain, I felt the greatness of nature and said "It's fantastic".It's was surrounded by other mountains.But the mountain is very high.So we could see the whole mountains Maybe It was the greatest moment in my life.I'm happy now because my friend said thank you to me with best her smile.her best smile.
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