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Application Letter
To whom It may Concern,
I am LiMing,a student of PK university whose major is Business Administration.I am writing you this letter to applying for your advertised position of accountant.
The reasons I think I am appropriate for your firm is followed.First,during my academic years,I have demonstrated excellent performance in this major and had a good command of necessary knowledge including marketing,accounting,economics,human resources,and so forth.Second,I have a good command of English and I am proficiency of French,which guarantees that I can communicate with foreigners fluently and smoothly and do some translation job for the cooperation efficiently.Third,I worked as an intern for many leading international companies during my summer holidays.
The file which is enclosing is my resume which includes more details.I really hope you will take application into consideration.I look forward to your early reply.
Yours truly,
LiMing
Application Letter
To whom It may Concern,
I am Li Ming, a student of PK university where my (whose) major is in Business Administration. I am writing (you this letter) to apply (applying) for your advertised position of accountant. I believe (The reasons I think) the following reasons demonstrate why I would make a suitable candidate for this role. (appropriate for your firm is followed).Firstly, (First,) during my academic years,I have achieved an (demonstrated) excellent performance in this major and gained (had) a good command of business (necessary) knowledge and etiquette, including marketing,accounting,economics,human resources,and so forth.Secondly, (Second,) I have a good command of English and I am proficient in (proficiency of) French, so have the ability (which guarantees that I can) to communicate with foreigners fluently and smoothly as well as carry out (and do some) effective translation (job) for your company. ( the cooperation efficiently.) Last, but not least, (Third,) I also worked as an intern for many leading international companies during my summer holidays. The file, which I am (is) enclosing relates to (is) my resume, which provides (includes) more detail. (details.) I sincerely (really) hope you will take application into consideration and (.I) look forward to your favourable (early) reply.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
Good Luck, Li Ming
Application Letter
To whom It may Concern,
I am LiMing,a student of PK university whose where my major is Business Administration. I am writing you this letter to applying for your advertised position of accountant.
The reasons I think I am appropriate for your firm is are as follows. First, during my academic years, I have demonstrated excellent performance in this major and had a good command of necessary knowledge including marketing, accounting, economics, human resources and so forth. Second, I have a good command of English and I am proficient of in/with French, which guarantees so that I can communicate with foreigners fluently and smoothly and do some translation jobs for the corporation efficiently. Third, I worked as an intern for many??? leading international companies during my summer holidays.
The file which that is encloseding is my resume which and it includes more details. I really hope you will take my application into consideration. I look forward to your early reply.
Yours truly,
LiMing
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