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I am becoming addicted to Breaking Bad!
I discovered this amazing television series a few months ago due to from a mate from my job where I work (so you aren't repeating "from") who advised me to learn English. So I paid attention to took his advice and I got the Season 1 on blu-ray in a Spanish shop on blu-ray two weeks ago. After watching this first season, I can't wait to watch the next season. Now I am looking forward to receiving getting the Season 2, which I bought through on the Internet for a low price with free shipment shipping included, for just 19.65€ on www.zavvi.es. Besides Plus, it is a Blu-Ray edition, which is usually more expensive than the a conventional DVD, so it is a bargain, isn´t it?. Also, you can enjoy watching more in a higher resolution on your FULLHD TV and maybe there is even some extra stuff in this edition which weren´t that wasn't included on the DVD version such as interviews, reports, the making of...
PS: thanks in advance for your revision.
Good grasp of English! Your errors were very basic.
I discovered an amazing television series a few months ago after a mate from my job advised me that it may help me to learn English. I followed his advice and purchased the Breaking Bad Season One Blu-Ray Disc from a Spanish shop two weeks ago. After watching the first season, I can't wait to watch the next season.
I am looking forward to receiving Breaking Bad Season Two, which I bought on the internet for a low price with free shipping included for just 19.65€ on zavvi.es. Plus it is the Blu-Ray edition which is usually more expensive than the conventional DVD, so that was is a bargain, wasn't it? Also, I will enjoy the higher resolution of the Blu-Ray Edition on my high-definition television, and maybe some extra content which wasn't included on the DVD version, like interviews, reports, and "The Making of Breaking Bad".
I am becoming addicted to Breaking Bad!
I discovered this amazing television series a few months ago due to a mate from my job who advised me to learn English. So I paid attention to his advice and I got the Season 1 episodes in a Spanish shop on blu-ray two weeks ago. After watching this first season, I can't wait to watch next season. Now I am looking forward to receiving the Season 2, which I bought through the Internet for a low price, with free shipment included, for just 19.65€ on www.zavvi.es. Besides, it is a Blu-Ray edition, which is usually more expensive than the conventional DVD, so it is a bargain, isn´t it? Also, you can enjoy watching more resolution on your FULLHD TV and maybe some extra stuff in this edition which wasn´t included on DVD version, such as interviews, reports, making of...
PS: thanks in advance for your revision.
[Good job. You could either say 'I got Season 1' or 'I got (all) the Season 1 episodes'. Also, 'stuff' is considered uncountable, and so it is referred to in the singular.]
I am becoming addicted to Breaking Bad!
I discovered this amazing television series a few months ago due to a mate from my job who advised me to learn English. So I paid attention to his advice and I got the Season 1 in a Spanish shop on blu-ray two weeks ago. After watching this first season, I cant wait to watch next season. Now I am looking forward to receiving the Season 2 which I bought through Internet for a low price with free shipment included for just 19.65€ on www.zavvi.es. Besides, it is a Blu-Ray edition, which is usually more expensive than the conventional DVD, so it is a bargain, isn´t it?. Also you can enjoy watching in a higher resolution on your FULLHD TV, and maybe there is some extra stuff in this edition which wasn´t included on the DVD version, such as interviews, reports, making of, etc...
PS: thanks in advance for your revision.
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