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Raul Gonzalez Blanco My favorite sportsman is Raul Gonzalez Blanco. he play football which is my favorite sport. In my childhood, he played in a famous team which is the favorite for my father. Raul was born in the capital of Spain, Madrid. When he was a kind, He loved playing football in your neighborhood them your parents wanted that your song was a wonderful footballer. He played football a lot of in real Madrid. raul became a famous footballer in the world. He went during a lot of years the best in Spain. He played football very good, but he was other skills more important for a sportsman. He hardly ever had a red card into the stadium, became he was a peaceful man. All people who practice football, know that he is more good man than good footballer. He had won many leagues in our country and some champion leagues in Europe. Nowadays, he plays in Al-Sadd Sports Club. Last month, his old team Real Madrid did him a tribute in Santiago Bernabeu ( this is the name of stadium of Real Madrid). R. Madrid played against his current team. This went nice and very emotional. To conclude, i think that all sportsman and sportswomen must to learn to him.

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Raul Gonzalez Blanco

My favorite sportsman is Raul Gonzalez Blanco. He plays football, which is my favorite sport. In/during my childhood, he played in a famous team which is also my father's favorite the favorite for my father.
Raul was born in the capital of Spain, Madrid. When he was a kind kid, he loved playing football in your his neighborhood them your . His parents wanted that your song him to become was a wonderful footballer.

(sus/su- diferente dependiendo de quien hablas. de él: his, de ellos: their)


He played football for a long time a lot of in(his team) Real Madrid. Raul became a famous footballer in/around (more emphatic) the world. He went was during a lot of years the best in Spain for many years.

He went: el fue - de ir: He went to the store.

He was: de ser - He was a very good striker.
He played football very good football, but he was also has other skills more important for a sportsman as well. He hardly ever had a red card into the stadium/on the pitch, became and he was a peaceful man. All people who practice football, know that he is more good a better man than a good footballer.
He has won many leagues in our country and some Champion Leagues in Europe.
Nowadays, he plays in Al-Sadd Sports Club. Last month, his old team Real Madrid did him a tribute for him in Santiago Bernabeu ( this is the name of stadium of Real Madrid's stadium). R. Madrid played against his current team. This went was nice and very emotional.
To conclude, I think that all sportsmen and sportswomen must to learn to from him.

 

 

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Hola Irene. I like Raul too! He really is an awesome player. :)

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Raul Gonzalez Blanco

My favorite sportsman is Raul Gonzalez Blanco. he plays football, which is my favorite sport. In my childhood, he played in a famous team which is the favorite of my father (alternative: my father's favorite).
Raul was born in the capital of Spain, Madrid. When he was a child, he loved playing football in his neighborhood. Then hsi parents wanted him to be wonderful footballer.
He played football a lot of in real Madrid. Raul became a famous footballer in the world. He was during a lot of years the best of Spain.
He played football very good, but he has other skills more important for a sportsman. He hardly ever had a red card into the stadium, because he was a peaceful man. All people who practice football know that he is a better man than a good footballer.
He has won many leagues in our country and some champion leagues in Europe.
Nowadays, he plays in Al-Sadd Sports Club. Last month, his old team Real Madrid did him a tribute in Santiago Bernabeu (this is the name of Real Madrid's stadium). R. Madrid played against his current team. This went nice and very emotional.
To conclude, i think that all sportsman and sportswomen must to learn of him.

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