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Jupiter A few days ago,My friend said we could see Jupiter in this year 's particular term.And I it's this month. Yesterday,I saw it when I was running at night time.I found it.It was very beautiful and shining heavenly. I felt romantic feeling under the blacked sky.

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Jupiter

A few days ago my friend said that we could see Jupiter in during this year's particular term. And I it's It takes place this month.
Yesterday I saw it when I was running at during the night time. I found it. It was very beautiful and shining heavenly.
**I felt romantic feeling under the blacked black sky.


** You could say: It was romantic under the black sky

     Or: There was a romantic feeling under the black sky


good job :)

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