The cloudy day
what a bad weather,when I get up.I can't see the sun,the thick fod ward of my sight.I think it must very cold today,so I wear the heavy clothes.But in the noon,the sun goes out.It was warm,the sunshine shoot in my face ,It warm my heart.And I think all thing is very nice right now.But I was wear too much.It makes me feel bad.I think the sunshine are represent hope and love.do you think so？
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The cloudy day
What a bad weather, when I get up I can't see the sun, the thick fog ward of obscures my sight. I think it must very cold today, so I wear the heavy clothes. But in the by noon, the sun goes is out. It was is warm, the sunshines shoot on my face, it warms my heart. And I think everything is very nice right now. But I was am wearing too many clothes it makes me feel bad. I think the sunshine are represents hope and love. Do you think so？
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