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My daughter's birthday.
Today is my daughter's second birthday! I can't wait to go home and celebrate together with her and my wife. My commute is quite long, about one and a half hours, so I will would probably punch out early today.
She still can't talk yet, which many people think is quite late, but I guess that's ok, for she understands quite a lot of what people say. She sometimes practices when she's in good mood, mumbling words that nobody else understands. We've been teaching her to answer "two" when someone is asking for her age. She used to answer, "eeei", which sounds a little like "one" in Chinese, and put up her index finger to indicate too. Now she can almost remember to answer "aaah" and put up two fingers.
I believe now she would have just had her nap, and my wife is going to take her to a small fun fair near our home and play in the sand there. Later on when I get back, we will meet at IKEA which had just opened two weeks ago near the subway station. She went had been there once at the day of the opening, and she loved it the place very much.
[There's nothing wrong gramatically with "had just opened" or "had been" in your last paragraph, but the usage of past tense seemed more appropriate than present perfect tense. I removed "the place very much" because "loved" already means a lot or very much. You could also say "she liked the place a lot" instead of "loved". This notebook entry is really well written with very few mistakes. Have a great birthday celebration with your family!]
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