My first time

Hello! I'm new in to this website. Up to now, I have just been visiting browsing all the pages, but and now I think that I'm ready to actually write something, but I don't know what... about that. Ok, I found a topic! to speak.

Last weekend I went with some friends to one a disco and we had a problem. When we are were talking or dancing, I don't remember exactly, my friend noted noticed your her jacket had was missing. First we thought the jacket had fallen and started looking for it, but we didn't see it.  find and were It seemed impossible not found to find it because it's rose (pink), it's a color that you can see easily! And I thought it was possible that other person someone had stolen it. And them Then we began to look for around the disco, and nearby we saw two women sitting with a similar jacket. My friend, realizing that it was her jacket, took it off and then began to discuss about how strange the jacket had missing. One of the women said she had taken the jacket had fallen down, so she picked it up.  However, we didn't believe her. but it was impossible. Then two women pretended to be angry and they left went.

I'm sure they tried to steal her jacket because in near that disco someone stole my Iphone three months ago.

And that is all. Bye and thanks for to reading.

My first time

Hello! I'm new in on this website. I have been visiting vitited many pages and now I thing that now I'm ready to write something but I don't know about that what exactly. Ok, I think I found a topic to speak about (or to write about).
Last weekend I went with some my friends to one the disco and we have had a problem. When we are were talking or dancing, I don't remember exactly, my friend noted that your his (- if it was his jacket or mine if it was your jacket) jacket had was missing. First we thought the jacket had fallen and started looking but we din't find haven't found it and were it was impossible not to found it because it's rose and it's a color that you can see easily! And I thought it was possible that other person had stollen. And Them we begun to look for around the disco and near we see saw two women (woman is single, women is plural) with a similar jacket. My friend took it off and then we began to discuss about how strange the jacket had was missing. One of the woman said she had taken down but it was impossible. (Do you mean next: The woman said that jacket was on the floor and she lifted it?) Then two womaen pretended to be angry and they went left. 

I'm sure they tried to steal her jacket because in near disco someone has stolen my Iphone iPhone (just marketing correction :)) three months ago.

And thats is (that is or that's) all. Bye and thank to reading.

Nice writing but I would recommend you to go to another disco next time :)