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About my
Hi, my name is Jennifer. I'm from Costa Rica. I'm 19 years old. My hobbies are going out with my friends, going to the mall, park or the beach, among others. I also like draw and paint. I'm learning English and it isn't very good now but I will perfect it.
About Me
Hi, my name is Jennifer. I'm from Costa Rica. I'm 19 years old. My hobbies are going out with my friends, going to the mall, the park or the beach, among others. Also I like to draw and paint. I'm learning English, and it is not not is good right now, and I would like perfect it.
A few corrections: You need to use capital letters (big letters) at the beginning of any word that is a proper noun, like a country or a name (Jennifer, Nicholas, Costa Rica, Mexico, etc).
Also, use a period (.) in between sentences and capitalize (Write big) the first letter of each sentence.
Good Luck!
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