A Composition

l read a book which was written by Chai Jing, a famous news host working for CCTV. The name of this book is <seeing>. The content is about her experiences that she experienced when she was interviewing others in during the program. She sorted(?) collected/listed her experiences and added her comments into this book.
l bought this book from internet. l knew others had given a high praise before l read it. When l received this book, l didn't read it at once, l looked through the index and the photos, then l found l did fall in love with this book, because l found his(?) her writing was artless effortless(?) and the content related to the daily life.
What Why this book left a deep impression on me was about because of the chapters about topic environmental pollution. There were many chemical factories in her hometown, she risked her life to interview the director of the factory, and also representatives of the Environment Protection Agency. She wrote the story about how she took recorded the evidence about of pollution when the camera was concealed; this is and something that was not easily to be seen by our the common people.
At last, Her commentary this thing from a shows a special and proper unique and appropriate viewpoint, which made allows readers easy to understand easily where the real problem is, and how we should how to solve this problem.
l am going to read this book again. l hope l can gain another feeling even more understanding that differs from my first from a second time.


l hope you can correct my composition.
Thanks.

A Composition

l read a book which was wrote written by Chai Jing, a famous news host working for CCTV. The name of this book is Seeing. The content is about experiences that what she experienced when she interviewed others in the program. She sorted documented her experiences and added her comments into this book.
l bought this book from off the Internet. l knew others had given a highly praised it before l read it. When l received this book, l didn't read it at once, l looked through the index and the photos, then l found that l did fall fell in love with this book it because l found his her writing was artless unpretentious and the content related to the daily everyday life.
What This book left a deep impression on me was about regarding the topic of environmental pollution. There were many chemical factories in her hometown, and she risked her life to interview the director of a factory and the Environment Protection Agency. She wrote the story about how she took the evidences about of pollution when the camera was concealed, and something that was not easily to be seen by our common people the general public.
At last Lastly, she commented this thing from a (the "a" is omitted) her own special and proper point of view, which made it easy for readers easy to understand where the real problem is lies and how we should how to solve this problem. l am going to read this book again. l hope l can gain another feeling a new perspective that differs from my first time reading it.


l hope you can correct my composition.
Thanks.

Notes:

- In English, we don't use <...> for titles of books and films, it is usually italicised.

- You can either say that you: "bought something off the Internet" or "bought something online".

- The word "artless" is very rarely used, and in this context it sounded as though you meant it in a negative way, ie. that her writing was crude or lacking in skill. I would recommend saying something like "sincere" or "unpretentious" instead.

- "At last" sounds like something that you have been waiting for, that has finally come. That didn't feel quite right in this context, so I changed it to "lastly".

Great job! This is a book that I would also be interested in reading, I'll see if I can find it online. Thanks for the tip ^^