Little invention about WW1

My Dear,

Tonight even if my body is tetanized (this makes no sense, because to tetanize someone means to give them tetanus. I think you mey mean something like 'frozen stiff') by the cold, I have a little bite bit more time to answer to your letter. Since I had leaved left you on the platform of the railway station, all the days were have been appalling. At each onset, some dozen dozens of our pals have fallen. Thomas and Bradley are died behind before my eyes. Please don’t say that to tell my parents, but even though everybody sustains supports everybody, the fear is everywhere in the trenches, as well and we are so nervous for about the next offensive as well. But if every day is a proof forall of us the last night was particularly bloody. Indeed, we lost about one hundred of our fighters because of the bombardment of our position by the German artillery. Despite the frightful living conditions, the trench is become such as like a second home for my division but and the fact that. I’m also look forward the end of the battle to have my first permission leave and to finally meet you again (it would be better to say, 'finally see you again'). It’s midnight and I end my letter by reminding you that I love you… forever.

With all my Love, Frank.

Good job. It needed several corrections, but something emotional like this isn't easy to translate.

Little invention about WW1

My Dear,

Tonight even if my body is tetanized terrorized by the cold, I have a little bite more time to answer to your letter. Since I had leaved left you on the platform of the railway station, all the everydays were has been appalling. At each the onset of battle, some dozen of our pals have fallen. Thomas and Bradley are died behind in front of my eyes. Please don’t say that to my parents. but Even though everybody sustains everybody, the fear is everywhere in the trenches as well and we are so nervous for the next offensive. But If every day is a was not proof enough for all of us, the last night was particularly bloody. Indeed, we lost about one hundred of our fighters because of the bombardment of our position by the German artillery. Despite the frightful living conditions, the trench is has become such as a second home for my division but and the fact that, I’m also I look forward to the end of the battle to for have my first permission to leave and finally met meet you again. It’s midnight and I end my letter by reminding you that I love you… forever.

With all my Love, Frank.