my day
today,i am very busy.
in the morning,i have to get up early,because i have got to go school and take 4 classes,English and Math .i know,my English is too bad,so i must to learn it hard and hard.
then,on the afternoon.i eat lunch with my father.we eat the fish hotpot.after that,i went to a supermarket to buy some rice,vegetables and a cup of yoghurt.when i arrived home,i taked care of my famliy's store.
in the evening,i wait my father go home.and write this sentence to pratice .
i decided i will get up later tomorrow!
please tell me where i write wrong.thank you !
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My Day
I was very busy today. I had to get up early in the morning, because i had to go school and take English and Math, plus four other classes. I know my English isn't the best, so I have to work even harder at it. In the afternoon I ate lunch with my dad and we had fish hotpot. After lunch, I had to go to the supermarket to buy some rice, vegetables and a cup of yogurt. When I got home later that afternoon, I took care of my famliy's store. This evening I waited for my father to get home and wrote this English entry. I also decided to get up later tomorrow!
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A very easy problem you can fix is your spaces after punctuation, and capital letters. A lot of Chinese make this mistake.
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"in the morning,i have to get up early,because i have got to go school and take 4 classes,English and Math .i know,my English is too bad,so i must to learn it hard and hard. "
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Should be;
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"In the morning, I have to get up early, because I have got to go school and take 4 classes, English and Math. I know, my English is too bad, so I must to learn it hard and hard."
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Please compare the two, before and after. I did not correct any mistakes in your English.
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Now see the fixed version of those two sentences with fixed prepositions and better wording.<br>
"In the morning I had to get up early, because I had to go to school and take 4 classes of English and Math. I know my English is not very good yet, so I must study hard."
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