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Snow! Yesterday there was snow. It started suddenly and was all day long. When I went home from a work I made the photo, which you can see below. It's in bad quality, sorry for it. As I sayed in a last post, I don't like autumn, but winter is not so awful for me. It's rather white and fluffy

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Snow!

Yesterday there was snow. [1] It started suddenly, and fell all day long. When I went home [2] from a work, I took the photo, which you can see below.  The quality is bad -- sorry about that. As I said in my last post, I don't like autumn, but winter is not as awful for me.  It's rather white and fluffy.

 

[1]  Good variant:  It snowed yesterday.

[2]  Good variant:  When I was going home  . . . 

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