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By the present letter, we hereby inform you about the quantities of defected rolls, which are unfit for use and about the quantities of sheared upper sides of cardboard produced by .... Spain. The causes of defects are following: strips, dents, folds on the rolls. The given information provided for the period from September 5 – September 18, 2013.
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"defective rolls"
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can anybody correct my entry
By the present letter, we hereby inform you about the quantities of defected rolls, which are unfit for use and about the quantities of sheared upper sides of cardboard produced by .... Spain. The causes of defects are the following: strips, dents, and folds on the rolls. The given information is provided for the period from September 5 – September 18, 2013.
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