A GOOD NEWS AND A BAD NEWS
ladies and getelmen:
i will tell you two news,a good news and a bad one.which do u want to know at first.
ok ,i know you can't wait to get the answer.Good news is that both of
boys' and girls' basketball in our class icezcooled yesterday.But the other one is a big big pity.We all lost .
we took part in the semifinal in yesterday afternoon.our girl were flowing so closed that they cann't play freely.In particular difficult in getting scores .The competitors higher stronger than us,and they were so rude.Many of our grils were hurt .However,they still work hard Instead of losing heart.we lost 2 score.Our girls is still wonderful!
After a while,it was time for our boys.At the begining,it seems that our guys not prepared well.They lost many score.We were nervous and so worried about ,athought we have confidence in them.lately,maybe their feeling was balk,they played better than better.In the while,so the competitors did.The score was near and enhancing.Marveling we cougtht up with them,the bell was ringing ,the game was over.47 to 49,just lost 2 score.
We lost the match yesterday,but they done well in my eyes. At least, we didn't give up and tried our best to play.Played out our own talent！
Come on , the last match is waiting for us! I blieve that third place is ours in tomorrow!
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Good news-bad news
Ladies and getlemen:
I will tell you two items of news, one good and one bad. Which one do you want to know first?
Ok, I know you can't wait to hear the answer. The good news is that both the boys' and the girls' basketball team in our class entered the semi-final yesterday. But the other one is a really shame. They both lost.
We took part in the semifinal yesterday afternoon. Our girls were defending and were followed (marked so closely) so closed that they couldn't play freely. In particular it was difficult to score .Our competitors were higher taller and stronger than us, they were so also rude. Most of our girls were hurt . However, they still worked hard Instead of losing heart. We lost by 2 score goals. Our girls were still wonderful!
After a while, it was time for our boys. At the begining, it seems that our guys weren't prepared well.
They let in many goals. We were nervous and so worried though we have confidence in them. late Later, maybe their feeling was back, they played better and better. In the while, the competitors also did. The score was near (close). Marveling, we caught up with them, the bell was ringing, the game was over - 47 to 49. The boys also just lost by just 2 goals .
We lost the match yesterday, but they did well in my eyes. At least, we didn't give up and tried our best to play. We played to the best of our ability.
Come on ,the last match is waiting for us! I believe that third place is ours tomorrow!
You must put the comma after the word followed by a space - not the other way around.
Example:
I like English, French, Italian and Portuguese. Correct!
I like English ,French ,Italian and Portuguese. Incorrect - wrong
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A GOOD NEWS AND A BAD NEWS
Good news - bad news.
I will tell you two items of news;
Ok, I know you can't wait to get ('hear' is better) the answer. The good news is that both the
We took part in the semifinal
After a while, it was time for our boys. At the begining, it seems that our guys were not prepared well. They lost many score. ('They let in many goals') We were nervous and so worried
We lost the match yesterday, but they
Come on, the last match is waiting for us! I believe that third place is ours
HI. The full stop goes at the end of a sentence followed by a space as follows:
A sentence. Another sentence. Another sentence.
I think that slightly shorter notebook entries are more likely to be corrected.
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Good news-bad news
Ladies and getlemen:
I will tell you two items of news,one good and one bad . Which one do you want to know first?
Ok,I know you can't wait to hear the answer.The good news is that both the boys' and the girls'basketball team in our class entered the semi-final yesterday. But the other one is a really shame. They both lost.
We took part in the semifinal yesterday afternoon. Our girls were defended and were followed so closed that they couldn't play freely. In particular it was difficult to score .Our competitors were higher and stronger than us, they were so also rude. Most of our girls were hurt . However,they still worked hard Instead of losing heart. We lost by 2 score. Our girls were still wonderful!
After a while,it was time for our boys.At the begining, it seems that our guys weren't prepared well.
They let in many goals. We were nervous and so worried though we have confidence in them. late ,maybe their feeling was back, they played better and better. In the while, the competitors also did. The score was near . Marveling we caught up with them,the bell was ringing ,the game was over-47 to 49. The boy also just lost by 2 goals .
We lost the match yesterday,but they did well in my eyes. At least, we didn't give up and tried our best to play.Played to the best of our ability.
Come on , the last match is waiting for us! I believe that third place is ours tomorrow!
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