I discovered the time machine. . .(interesting)
Dear diary,
One day I discovered the time machine which I can travel in time, it is really exciting and many people are interested in. Since my discovery I became very famous and thousands of people would give everything to me to use that machine. I am glad because I can write my memories to you after my time travel because it means that I made a succesful thing that is working. I went back to the 19th century because I always attracted the women's fashion, the beautiful basket clothes and I wanted to try how is that feeling to wear these clothes and live in this time.
Therefore I decided I go back in time it took five minutes and I arrived to the park where somebody was sitting next to me. Later she turned out that she was my friend in my life before. She worn a long basket clothes which was drab and she had a beautiful hat on her head. She looked amazing. My goal was to meet 19th century's girls behaviour and their clothes. So we started to talk about these I really enjoyed it was interesting. She told that if you are in the park then you are not allowed to meet other people because it is unpolite behaviour. The other most important thing was the walk, for example: if the girl's walk was bashful but serious then she is the right girl. Furthermore she said that good appetite is bad sign and lads use to watch how many bites the girls eat. I found it ridiculous. Item it was a good point if a girl is blush, it means the girl is moralist. I really enjoyed talking to her but I had to break the conversation because my real life is waiting me to go back. I said goodbye and I thanked that she let me to get insight into these things.
Thank you for reading, I hope it was not too boring. I have mistakes please fix it. (if you have mistakes you can study from it and I will study.) Thank you!
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"Discover" is not applicable under this circumstance , in my opinion, to use "invent " would be much better
You may say one star was "discovered" by some astronomer ,however , you cannot say you "invent" the star as it already exists there for a long time .
On the contrary , you cannot say you discover a machine as it does not exist before your invention .
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