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The Internet Do you substitute watch movies online for going to the cinema with friends? Do you go to shop replace by shopping online? Just as the vivid drawing illustrats, people are placed in seperate but adjoining cells which made by a giant net. And everyone is facing to his computer. The picture shows:the Internet make people either keep track of each other or add the distance of them, and the indication is increasing. The same dramatic technologist changes that have provided people with more communications choices that have increased risk that some people will lose the ability to cope with interpersonal relationship in reality, as the relationship begin to drift apart. In my opinion, perhaps it's the time for coming back the deal life. Inviting some good friends to play basketball or joinning some community activities and so on. We should use the Internet reasonable and respect our real life.

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The Internet

Do you substitute watching movies online for going to the cinema with friends? Do you go to Instead of shopping in person replace by are you shopping online? Just as the vivid drawing example illustrates, people are placed in seperate but adjoining cells which made by a giant net (?). And everyone is facing to his using their computer.
The This picture shows:the Internet make helps people either keep track in contact with of each other or it adds the distance of between them, and the indication is that the distance is  increasing. The same dramatic technologist technological changes that have provided people with more communications choices that have increased the risk that some people will lose the ability to cope with interpersonal relationships in reality person, as the relationship begins to drift apart.
In my opinion, perhaps it's the time for coming to come back to the your dreal life. Inviting some good friends to play basketball or joinning some community activities and so on would be an example. We should use the Internet reasonable in a responsible manner and respect our real life.

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