the duck story

Yesterday ,as usual, we walked with my dog through the park. It's a very big bushy city park that looks just like forest. It even has three lakes. When we went towards one of the lakes we saw a big flock of ducks that swam at the center of it. My dog is a Husky that's why she has very strong hunting instincts. The view of potential prey gets her very excited. She ran into the water immediately. I thought that the flock will see the dog and run away but there was fog over the lake and Ashley swam very close to the ducks. When they saw her they didn't fly. They began to swim away very slow instead. Two ducks split from the flock and began to attack the dog. I suppose they were something like duck security. Ashley chased the ducks for few hundred meters before she got tired and understood that she had no chance. After that, she turned to the bank and the ducks and dog exchanged roles - the ducks began to chase the dog. When she reached the bank she rested for a very long time on her back. I don't think she will talk about that experience with another dogs.

your essay is nice and apart from some small grammatical errors, it makes sense and you can make yourself understood to native English speakers. very good ! (i wish i could write essays in russian the way you do in english) haha

the duck story

Yesterday we walked, as usual, with my dog through the park. It's a very big bushy city park that looks just like a forest. There's even three lakes. When we went toward one of the lakes we saw a big flock of ducks that were swming at the center of it. My dog is a Husky that's why she has a very strong hunting instinct. The view of potential prey makes her very excitable. She run into the water immediately. I thought that the flock would see the dog and run away but there was a fog over the lake and Ashley swam very close to the ducks. When they saw her they didn't fly. They began to swim away very slow instead. Two ducks split from the flock and began to attack the dog. I suppose they were something like duck security. Ashley chased the ducks for a few hundred meters before she tired and understood that she have no chance. After it she turn to the bank and the ducks and dog exchanged/swapped roles - the ducks began to chase after the dog. When she reached the bank she rested for a very long time on her back. I don't think she will talk about that hunting with other dogs.