My first online lesson.

Hello Everybody,
My name is Ramon.
I just finished my first online lesson on Italki. I found it very, very interesting, also because of my teacher, Darren, which who is from Australia. I'm a beginner, but I always loved learning English. I studied French at high school, but since then I haven't had no any bases experience of with the language. But now, because I have been thinking of about getting a doing work experience in a foreign English speaking country, I have decided to remedy this lack.
The way is long, but nothing is impossible with commitment and passion.
Best regards to everybody,

Ramon

Very good Ramon! The corrections aren't major and because this is your first time writing it is the hardest writing that you will do. Your writing will get better, and easier, with practice. For a first attempt I think it is excellent.

I will talk to you soon.

All the best,

Darren

My first online lesson

Hello everybody,
My name is Ramon.
I just finished my first online lesson on Italki. I found it very very intersting, also cause of my teacher, Darren, which is from Australia. My Australian teacher, Darren, made it very interesting. I'm a beginner, but I've always loved learning English. I studied French at high school, then I haven't no bases of the language but I haven't continued it since. *2 But now, Recently, however, cause I have been thinking of about getting a work experience in a foreign English-speaking country, and have therefore I decided to remedy this lack.*3
The way journey is long, but nothing is impossible with commitment and passion.

Best regards to everybody,

Ramon

*1 cause is a noun or verb; because is the conjunction you should use in this case

*2 Try not to start a sentence with the word but.

*3 You can use lack with an object -- e.g. lack of skills, lack of data, lack of funding -- or even describe something as lacking... but you cannot use the word lack on its own in the way you did.