10/14

Hello, This is Jay
I have been living in the United State for many years, and STILL having a trouble when I talk to people in English.
I make a lot of grammatical errors, so please, feel free to correct them.
Also, I think I am really weak at expression of daily conversation, I talk more like a text book. If you know better expression, please share.

Anybody from Chicago, went to the Kaskade concert yesterday? I have never heard of this guy before, so had no idea who Kasakde was. My friend told me he was quite famous. One of my friends has a problem with his ear drum, and he is still whining about it. It was such a bad day for him. He met this weird man who was touching my friend while he was dancing with other girls. But I really enjoyed the concert.

Not very sure about " My friend told me he was/is quite famous"

10/14

Hello, this is Jay.
I have been living in the United States for many years, and I am STILL having a trouble when I talk to people in English.

I will makes a lot of grammatical errors, so please feel free to correct them. 

Also, I think I am really weak at expression of daily conversation; I talk more like a text book. If you know more casual or natural(?) expressions, please share.

Did anybody from Chicago, go to the Kaskade concert yesterday? I have never heard this guy before, so I had no idea who Kasakde was. My friend told me he is quite famous. Because of the concert, one of my friends has a problem with his ear drum, and he is still whining about it. It was such a bad day for him. He met this weird man who was touching him while they were dancing with some girls. But, personally, I really enjoyed the concert.