Unusal person
I love talking to new people. It is enjoyable to learn something unfamiliar about surrounding world, people's behavior and their life experience. A person, who attracted my attention to his personality and affected my opinion about people's behavior very strongly, was a colleague of mine. We worked together just three month. But during this time I understood I met a strange and unique person.
First, he never did something if he didn't want to. For instance, he never changed his seat in the bus, if even someone asked him. He knew it is impolite, but even so he didn't do it.
In addition, he liked to check colleague's reaction to his actions. He could come to work in clothes which does not appropriate to a dress-code of the company. Moreover, he spoke aloud by cell phone whith friends during a work-day.
Of course, he got in trouble because of his misbehaviour and finally lost a job. But I have never seen him in a bad mood. I called him recently. He said he had travelled a lot, he had found a new job and he was happy.
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This is very very good! There are a few stylistic changes that I recommend, however.
Unusal person
I love talking to new people. I enjoy learning something unfamiliar about the surrounding world, people's behavior and their life experience. A colleague of mine attracted my attention to his personality and effected my opinion about people's behavior very strongly. We worked together just three months, but during this time I understood I met a strange and unique person.
First, he never did something if he didn't want to. For instance, he never changed his seat in the bus, if even someone asked him. He knew it was impolite, but even so he didn't do it.
In addition, he liked to check colleagues' reaction to his actions. He would come to work in clothes which were not appropriate to the dress-code of the company. Moreover, he spoke loudly on his cell phone with friends during the workday.
Of course, he got in trouble because of his misbehaviour and finally lost his job. But I have never seen him in a bad mood. I called him recently. He said he had travelled a lot, and that he had found a new job and was happy.
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Exactly! Your definition of my colleague is more appropriate and concise than mine:)
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Your "strange and unique" colleague, is an authentic person. He is not interested on other people opinion about him. He know what he like and he goes for it. Here and there, perhaps,he can be considered also egotist. If he accepts that his right of doing what he likes finish when the right of other starts, I think he would be close to perfect.
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