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Modern communication systems benefits many people, yet there are some that oppose to them/ do you agree?
In the last century, that by technology’s advances have led to the increase in the number of various modern communication methods have been brought significant change to mankind’s progress. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether this achievement positiveinfluence positively outweighs the negative. While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, I personally believe that the benefits of these tools far outweigh their its drawbacks. These benefits are twofold.
First and foremost, the advancement of technology in communication not only helps humans to save time and money, but also motivates the global economy global. To illustrate, some contact methods, such as phone, email, facebook, support connectivity, help people keep in touch, as well as exchange information from throughout that requires only a few seconds to be informed of something, rather than either spend too much time getting a letter or be face–to–face using traditional methods. Moreover, with various companies, especially international corporations, which have a variety of branches and subsidiary companies in faraway places, new communication techniques that help to transfer and carry out decisions immediately from far sections are absolutely pivotal factor in their success.
Additionally, the impact of modern communication systems impact to break up existing distances make the world become smaller. The appearance of the internet or facebook create numerous opportunities to strangers from over the world to make friends easily. In evidence, through facebook you are in Vietnam and conveniently to explore about culture, events of America, Brazil, or South Africa. In the past, before the internet, if wanting contact with others in far areas was needed, people are compelled to waste a large amount of time. Nowadays by phone, however, people are possible to connect at any time. Last but not least, some modern tools support keeping in touch with family, friends over long periods of time, thanks to application of phone or the internet.
In conclusion, regardless of some detrimental influences of modern communication systems, its merits roles are so fundamental and significant for the global’s development.
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