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About me Hello everyone! my name is Luis from Perú. I am here because I want to improve my english. I hope the next fall semester I could be in U.S for study CA (Computer Animation) that It was my dream since I left High school. I am a little old (21), the last couple of years I had some health trouble which I prefer to don't talk about it. I won't give up because It is my dream. I am applying for some scholarship and maybe I will get some loans because It's so expensive.. I am going to start my own visual diary which is really nice! and also is a requirement from CalArts. This is my new site: http://luchinart.blogspot.com Now I have spent more than 10 hours per day drawing since more than 2 weeks now, It is crazy but I really love it! I am homeboy for now hahah, because I don't have time for make friends even I am taking english class. I want to be a great director or technical director in the film industry! My goals for now: Become a really good drawer. Improve my english. Participate in some social community activities. Make some good friends in this site. Future goals: 27-28 years old. Adopt a baby or kid! Work in film industry! Start a charity! more...

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About me

 

Hello everyone! my name is Luis from Perú. I am here because I want to improve my english. I hope the next fall semester I will be in U.S to study CA (Computer Animation). that It was my dream since I left high school. I am a little old (21), the last couple of years I had some health trouble which I prefer to not talk about it. I won't give up because it is my dream. I am applying for some scholarships and maybe I will get some loans because it's so expensive.. I am going to start my own visual diary which is really nice! and also is a requirement from CalArts.

This is my new site: http://luchinart.blogspot.com

Now I have spent more than 10 hours per day drawing for more than 2 weeks now, it is crazy but I really love it!
I am homeboy for now hahah, because I don't have time to make friends even while I am taking my english class. I want to be a great director or technical director in the film industry!

My goals for now:

Become really good at drawing
Improve my english.
Participate in some social community activities.
Make some good friends in this site.

Future goals:

27-28 years old. Adopt a baby or kid!
Work in film industry!
Start a charity!
more...

 

 

 

- Hello! Nice to meet you. I hope you are able to study computer animation.

- Highlight where I changed something and red words for where I added words.

- Capitolize at the beginning of a sentence and proper nouns. Don't capitolize after a comma.

- Those are good goals, I wish you luck!

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