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Holiday in October
No, I'm not crazy. Months ago, I received a notification that said that I had been awarded a was chosen to get a scholarship. My destination is I will be using the scholarship to go to Valencia,Spain and the objective is to learn and practice English with other students from different universities in Spain.
I am going to have a full time English class during the first week. will have class of English full time during one week and The classroom will include about five or six students and a teacher whose native language is English. be of five/six student with a native teacher, I hope I can improve my English there.
Valencia It's is a great town of Spain. It has a good weather, it's and it is a huge town, so I'm excited to go there. I have never been in to Valencia because it's very far from my town, but people say me that Valencia is wonderful.
If i I can write every day when I am there, I will do it.
NOTE: ( It is better if you say : "If I could and had enough time to write about my journey, I definitely would." )
[Your corrections are welcome, you will help me to improve my English. Thanks]
Good luck! Let me know if you had any questions about the corrections that I have made on your essay! Congrats on your scholarship and good luck with your English!
Saludos!
-Diana
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