I love my mum

I love my mum. She is a common person, but I think she is the most beautiful woman in the world.
She look after me carefully. She prepares my lunch every day. She can cook delicious food.
I want to say thank you to my dear mum because she is kind.

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I love my mum

I love my mum. Although to most people she is a common very ordinary person ,but i think she is the most beautiful woman in the world.
She looks after me carefully. she prepares my lunch every day, and she can cook delicious food.
I want to say thank you to my dear mum because she is so kind.