Daily Diary

Hi everyone, in this notebook I will describe what I did today in English. I would like to received more of your feedback.

Today was a busy day! Early this morning, I walked for thirty minutes after I got up at six. The air smelled fresh and I felt more confident to begin a working day. Yesterday, I set up a plan to meet the good farmer who is my client in my management region at 9o'clock at his field. I and My client and I talked more about how to improve rice productivity while reducing pesticide and fertilizer use. His cultivation technique is worst among all my other clients'. (So) He is usually invited to join many TV shows or appear on live TV programs. (This is unclear. He is the worst and he gets invited to TV shows?? I removed "so".)
In the afternoon, I met six different both wholesalers and retailers who sell my company's products such as seed, pesticide, and fertilizer. We discussed about the product's price increase. What are the causes? How does the price influence the rice market? (or How do the prices influence the rice market?)
Finally, I wrote a daily report which includes my result today and plan to send to my boss tomorrow.
I think that today is a successful day although I became so tired.

Notes:

1. "At early morning" is wrong (although "at dawn" works, since dawn is a particular moment). Either in early morning OR in the early morning sounds good to me.
2. Early on Monday morning is fine.

Daily Diary

Hi everyone, in this notebook I will describe what I did today in English. I would like to received more of your feedback.

Today is a busy day! At the Early this morning, I walked for thirty minutes after getting up at six. The air is fresh and I feel more confident in beginning the working day. Yesterday, I set up a plan to meet the good farmer, who is my client in my management region, at 9 at his field. I and my client talked more about How to improve rice productivity when reducing pesticide and fertilizer use._His cultivation technique is worst worse compared with that of all my other clients. So he is Usually he is invited to join many TV shows or appear on live TV programs.

In the afternoon, I met six different both wholesalers and retailers who sell my company's products such as seeds, pesticides, and fertilizer. We discuss about the increasing of each product's price. What are the causes? How does these price influence the rice market.... (I know in Vietnamese "..." is etc but in English you have to write the word "etc". "..." for us is a symbol for a pause in thought)
Finally, I wrote a daily report which included my today's results and tomorrow's plans to send to my boss.
I think that todayis was a successful, day although I am so tired.

For the sentence "So he is usually invited to join many TV shows or appear on live TV programs."

I feel you mean "Somehow he is invited to join many TV shows or appear on live TV programs."

I assume this based on him having a bad technique doing what he does.