An unforgettable memory.
Today is the last day of National Day in China, which is from October 1st to October 7th,I have to go to class tomorrow .I just play with high . Itˊs so sad !
During the National Day, I traverled with friends who are my high school classmates.We havenˊt seen each other for a long time .I miss them very much .We went to the lushan mountain in jiangxi province.Lushan mountain is on the world heritage list . I felt like I was in heaven when i stand on the mountains look down.It for me, it is an unforgettable memory.
Triassic springs also is a unforgettable scenery.There are three waterfalls, flowing in turn.When the sun , it will be a lot of the rainbow.wow,it is surprised for me .so beautiful .
Having a change ,I recommend you also go and see,I can be your tour guide .
But I suggest not to go on holiday,Do you know what the population of China? haha ,You see ,right?
Tomorrow's time for class, come on!
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Itˊs my pleasure,Thank you for helping me correct .Welcome you visit to Lushan.
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An unforgettable memory.
Today is the last day of National Day in China, which is from October 1st to October 7th. Tomorrow I have to go to school. I just play with high (??) (We had real fun there!) . Itˊs so sad! (It´s sad that those days are gone so quickly!)
During the National Day, I traveled with friends who are my high school classmates. We havenˊt seen each other for a long time. I miss them very much. We went to the Lushan mountain in Jiangxi province. Lushan mountain is on the world heritage list. I felt like I was in heaven when I stand on the mountains look down. For me, it will be an unforgettable memory.
Triassic Springs also is a unforgettable scenery.There are three waterfalls, flowing in turn. When the sun shined rainbows appeared. Wow,it was a great surprise for me, it was so beautiful.
Having a change, I recommend you also go and see, I can be your tour guide .
But I suggest not to go on holiday. Do you know what the population of China? If you do, you got it, right? Haha
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Can you point out where I was wrong? Thanks a lot .
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