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About committing crimes again Leaving away from the prisons as much earlier as possible has been the dream of many criminals. However, when they set free from the prison to have a freedom and universal life, problems ensue - they are tend to commit crime again - and these problems require effective solutions. Above all, there are several reasons for criminals to make mistakes again. Firstly, during the prison life the negative influence of the circumstance upon the physiological and mental state of the criminals has been neglected. That is to say, they fail to go straight and turn over a new leaf, therefore, personal inferiority complex and psychological barriers are difficult to overcome. Secondly, sometimes it is inappropriate for them, especially for those who lived in prison so many years, to released from it for the can not adapt to the ongoing society, which may give rise to the second crimes. In addition, they are easer than others to face prejudice and discrimination in our society, by which they can not find employment opportunities and restore their family life. Consequently, they have to commit again to survival or to enjoy the prison life again, maybe that is where the rub is. The best way to overcome it , so at least it seems to me, is to ensure the employment and living quality of those ex-criminals, thereby reducing discrimination. Besides, when they are in the prison, the primary responsibility of the governor is to prevent the negative communication between them and do psychological counseling and vocational training for the criminal to make them completely get rid of the criminal mentality and earn their own living. The harmonious society is not the result of GDP ranking over the world but of the low criminal rate.

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About Committing Crimes Again

 

Leaving away from the prisons as much early as possible has been is the dream of many criminals. However, when they are set free from the prison to have a freedom and universal life, problems ensue - they are tend to commit crimes again. - and these This is a problems requires an effective solutions.

Above all, There are several reasons for criminals to make mistakes commit crimes again after their release. Firstly, during the prison life, there is negative influence of the circumstance upon the physiological and mental state of the criminals. The circumstances of this influence have been neglected. That is to say, they fail to go straight and turn over a new leaf,. therefore,This means that personal inferiority complexes and psychological barriers are difficult to overcome.

 

Secondly, sometimes it is inappropriate difficult for them, especially for those who lived in prison have spent so many years, to be released from it for because they cannot adapt to the ongoing changes in society,. whichThis, in and of itself, may give rise to them commiting second more crimes after their release. In addition, they are easer than others more likely to face prejudice and discrimination in our society,; by which such as they cannot find employment opportunities and or restore their family life. Consequently, they feel that they have to commit crimes again in order to survive. Or, perhaps they to enjoy the prison life again more than being on the outside,. Maybe that is where the rub is.


Perhaps the best way to overcome this problem it , so at least it seems to me in my opinion at least, is to ensure the employment and living quality of these ex-criminals, thereby reducing discrimination and the possibility of them commiting more criminal acts. Besides, when while they are in the prison, the primary responsibility of the governorment isshould be to prevent the negative communication between them, as well as to and do psychological counseling and vocational training, in the hopes for the criminal to make them allow them to completely get rid of the forget their criminal mentality and hopefully earn their own living.

 

Therefore, I believe that a The harmonious society is not the result of GDP ranking ruling over the world, but of the a lower criminal crime rate.

 

 

I have corrected your entry as best I can, based on my understanding of your writing. I hope this helps you in what you are trying to bring across.

 

~Samantha  :)

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