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(This essay is a part of my exam, so please help me and correct me as much as you can)
Every generation is different from the previous one in important ways. How is your generation different from your parents´ generation? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
Over the years humanity produces two kinds of society: a new and an old generation. Nowadays we are living in a modern, global world where a new kind of generation is growing up rapidly, especially in Russia which is my country. In my opinion, the modern Russian generation is different from their parent´s generation at several levels.
First of all, the modern Russian generation has unique treats, such as a flexible mind, pro-innovative values and attitudes which distinguish them from their parents´ generation. The main reason for it is a worldwide using of IT-technologies and the Internet. For example, a lot of modern students possess laptops or Iphones, which contain pieces of software such as translators, book-readers, photo-editors and others. All of those are leading to an improvement of the student´s educational level and make them more successful.
In addition, modern youngsters are more communicative and open-minded. Indeed, the teenagers of the XXI century do not have any borders or hestitate to speak with new friends from all over the world. This is not the case of most adults when they have to face world-wide global communication situatios. Some psychologists relate this fact with adults´behaviorial features. They state that parents are more inclined to close family relationships and deep emotions, differently from teenagers.
If we were to compare generations, we could say that the modern one is less responsible than their predecessors, especially in the professional sphere. The statistics of employment departments say that the labour turnover among young people happens more frequently than among adults, specifically in Russia. My personal labour experience has demonstrated the accuracy of that fact directly. After the interview, the chief gave priority to adult men who had a big package of work experience and social links.
By way of conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, I am of the opinion that in most cases it is actually more common to find several differences between modern and previous generations. These treats are reflecting specifically the Russian experience, however I believe that they could be found in other countries, too. :)
(In this passage I do my essay for the exam, please, help and correct me as much as u can)
Every generation of people is different in important ways. How is your generation different from your parents´ generation? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
Every historical period the humanity produces two kind of society: a new and old generation. Nowadays we also are living in the modern global world where the new kind of generation is grow up rapidly. Especially in Russia which is my country I have mentioned these process too. In my opinion, the modern russian generation is different from the parent´s generation for several points.
First of all, the modern russian generation has the unique treats such as flexible mind, pro-innovative values and attitudes which distinguish them from the parents´ generation.The main reason of it is a global worldwide using the IT-technologies and internet. For example, a lot of modern students possess the laptops or Iphones, which contain the sort of acommodate softwares such as translators, book-readers, picture-drowers and others. Therefore, all of them are leading to improve the student´s educational level and make it more successfull.
In additional, the modern youth are more communicative and open-minded persons. Indeed, the teenagers of the XXI centure do not have any borders and hestitate feelings speaking with new friends from all over the world. In this case for the most adults the world-wide global communication is not occure frequently. Some psychologiests relate this fact with adults´behaviorial features. They state that parents in communication are more inclined to close family relations and deep emotions, instead of teenagers.
In contrast, comparing generations we could say that the moderns are less responsible than their predecessors, especially in the professional sphere. The statistics of employment departments says that the labour turnover among young people is occure frequently than amoung adults, specifically in Russia. My personal labour experience has demonstrated that directly. After the interview the chief gave priority to the adult men who had the big package of work experience and social links.
By way of conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, I am of the opinion that in most cases it is actually more common to define severals sorts of distinguises between modern and parent´s generation. These treats are reflexing specifically through the russian experience,however I beleive that it could be possible to meet in other places too.
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