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A new life. A faculty of Forein Languages.
Oh my God, I'm a student! You know, it's no so easy to study in a university... And now I could understand that university COMPLETELY differs from school. In school my knowledge of English was the best in the form, however in the university it's not so.
More than that, I have to do A LOT of homework every day and I should write an essay or composition in English every week. Don't think that I'm complaining here, but I'm really shocked, because I haven't enough time on anything.
On the other hand, I really enjoy studying English. I knew a lot of new things about this language. And it seems I knew a lot of new things about myself. A choice to become an interpreter causes me to be more hard-working, more persistent... It learns me don't give up easily. And if my language skills are not well now, I'll do them perfect!
A New Life. A Faculty of Foreign (Forein) Languages.
Oh my God, I'm a student! You know, it's not (no) so easy to study in a university... And now I can (could) understand how (that) university differs COMPLETELY (differs) from school. In school, my knowledge of English was the best in the form, however, in (the) university, it's not so. More than that, I have to do A LOT of homework every day and I should write an essay or composition in English every week. Don't think that I'm complaining here, but I'm really shocked, because I haven't enough time for everything (on anything). On the other hand, I really enjoy studying English. I have learnt (knew) a lot of new things about the (this) language and, (. And) it seems, I have learnt many (knew a lot of) new things about myself. My desire (A choice) to become an interpreter drives (causes) me to (be) work harder and more persistently (more hard-working, more persistent)... It teaches (learns) me not to (don't) give up easily. And, if my language skills are not up to standard (well now), then I'll strive for perfection ! (do them perfect!)
Nice essay. Have just suggested some better phrases to improve the grammar and make it sound more native.
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