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I'm here :)
Hi to everyone!
I am an Italian student. I love to study foreign languages - especially English! - but unfortunately, I have not so many occasions to practice them in the "real" life. I really wish to improve my English, so I'm here looking for someone who wants (verb form needs to agree with the subject noun 'someone', singular) to help me :)
Moreover, I would be so glad to help you with Italian, if you want to learn it/that language!
The English is good, and I suspect a little more of it would show how good. I have a slight question about (1) the use of em-dashes in your second sentence (should they be parentheses instead) and (2) the pronoun 'it' at the very end. They aren't errors, just style or personal taste, I guess. The 'it' I felt is too 'bald' hanging there at the end referring to 'Italian'. I'm sure others will disagree.
I'm here :)
Hi to everyone!
I am an Italian student. I love to study foreign languages especially English! Unfortunately, I do have not many opportunities to practice them in "real" life. I really want to improve my English so I'm here looking for someone who would like to help me. :)
Moreover, if you are studying Italian I would be very glad to help you it!
Good job. Your vocabulary is pretty good. I understood the points you were trying to make. I streamlined it some. I hope you find it helpful. Al
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