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Life is full of surprises Learn to live is one secret and very a few people have knowledge about happy life. People always have troubles and preoccupations, moreover, people need to have problems because is the life, so we have the solutions in our pansy, I think that is necessary to be quiet when we have problems, for example one day I had a lot of problems and didn't know that do, I thought, what happen with my life? I had bought a new cellphone very expensive and after four hours, I lost it, I was brushing my teeth and I had the cellphone in my jacket pocket and when I turned to take water the phone fell into bathroom; later my girlfriend broke with me, after, an excellent friend died, I had been bored all this troubles but I continued the way and then all was better, for this reason, I believe that the problems have solutions.

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Life is full of surprises

Learning to live is one secret and very a few people have knowledge about living a happy life. People always have troubles and preoccupations - moreover, people need to have problems because this is part of life, so we have the solutions in our pansy [?]. I think that it is necessary to be quiet when we have problems. For example, one day I had a lot of problems and didn't know that do. I thought, what happen with my life? I had bought a  very expensive new cellphone very expensive and after four hours, I lost it. I was brushing my teeth and I had the cellphone in my jacket pocket. When I turned to take water, the phone fell into bathroom; later my girlfriend broke with me; after that, an excellent friend died. I had been depressed with all these troubles, but I continued in this way and then all was better. For this reason, I believe that most problems have solutions.

 

[Good work.  You basic sentence structure is good, but you need to shorten your sentences and not use so many commas to connect indendent phrases.]

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Hola, hablo ingles pero quiero ayudar español. Avisé que estás escribiendo sobre ideas complejas. Good job! Hi, I speak english but I want to learn spanish. I noticed that you're writing about complex ideas. Good job!

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