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My Campus
My campus is located in the LieShan district where away from the noise of the city district, away from the noise of the city. Trough Through the gate, you can see a lot of peach trees and pear tress standing to welcome your arrival you on arrival [the first way wasn't actually wrong, but not so natural]. Next to peach tress is the sea of sunflowers which extends as far as the eye can see, losing itself in the shadowy distance of the teaching buildings University/Campus buildings [again, what you said wasn't wrong, just an uncommon phrase]. The dining room cafeteria [a dining room is the room in a house, rather that at a university], the stadium and the apartments lie in elsewhere.
In the morning, the whole campus hidden in the faint morning mist is so warm and beautiful as if it were a fairyland. The students *move at a rushed pace to the classroom* [not wrong but slightly oddly worded, i think "The students rush/hurry to class" would be better], some students are reading books and reciting practising [reciting is for theatre] English words in the stadium or the open space behind the teaching buildings, their sounds spectrum [?] into a wonderful and beautiful music.
When the bells ringing, students pour out the classroom as if a bird fly out of the jungle like birds flying out of the jungle. Some of them are going go to play basketball, eating dinner and so on. When night falls, the din of day fades away, *and only can heard the sound of insects and the whisper between couples* [to the order here is a bit off, you would say "and only the sound of insects and the whisper(s) between couples can be heard].
I hope this helps.
You have a very poetic way of speaking english :)
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