This is the text of a short comic book of mine I'm trying to translate to english

Hi. The meaning is already very clear! It's very easy for an English-speaker to understand what you have written.

I will just change a few words which are very small mistakes:

1. The banality of everyday life. / People talk with each other, without really care caring for one another./ Talking is just an excuse to talk about yourself.
I hear people. /My earphones are broken./ I remember the reason why I use then them.
every word they say seems uninteresting./ I can’t pretend that I’m like then them.
The problem is that being like this, it’s harder to get a girlfriend.
At my age, if you don’t have a girlfriend or make out with everyone, they treat you like a loser.
I hope to survive high school.
hey, that old man! /He caught the same wagon that I did every single day last week./ and I was late twice, and once I was early… / Would it be a coincidence?
Next page, character one looks surprised.
What?? The old man, again? But I saw him entering another wagon So, that bastard… /Is he really following me?
Character two
2.No, I’m not following you.
1. What? How did you….or rather, who are you? I already have seen you travelling on the same wagon as me.
2: Yes, indeed. We’ve been close the last month.
(Thinking) 1:The last month? I thought it was just last week..
2: But I wasn’t following you./I was waiting for the right moment.
2. Some important thing happens just in very specific moments. / The day you met your best friend is a specific day./ Or when you finally get your dream job…or when you meet the love of your life,Today ,is the day for you to meet me.
1.(serious) who are you?
2. It’s a good question, but.../ it’s not the right one. / The right question would be: what can I do for you?
1. What?
2. There it is./ Before I answer, I want you to see something important. /THIS.
1. a…ring?
2: brilliant, yes, it is a ring. /but it is not an ordinary ring.
1. It is gonna make me invisible?
2. Way better than that. Lets say it is gonna make you…lucky.
1.Oh, cool…
2.Of course you think I’m crazy, but what if right now a very beautiful girl walks in through that door.
Walks in a very beautiful girl in the exact moment A very beautiful girl walks in at that exact moment. Character one looks amazed.
1. so beautiful…
1.You may resume, what were you saying?
2.Finally I got your attention. / That girl is pretty cute, isn’t it?/ Usually you would be open-mouthed, would follow her with your eyes and… would be deadly almost paralyzed, is that correct?
2. Try putting on the ring.
Silence for a moment.
1. Nothing to lose… (he puts on the ring)1. what now?Wow!/ It is strange this sensation… I feel like having I have a chance.
2. And you have it./ Now just go talk to her.
1. I was already going to.

Frazetta, I had no problem understanding your writing. The small corrections are just to make it "more correct" :)

Your English is already very good! :)