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The First day: My Morning! I had gone to bed at 8 in yesterday evening,and I get up at about 7:10 in this morning. I went out at 9 am.what I did in the 7 to 8:40 am? They are washed cloths,bath and ate breakfast. I created a new breakfast,I think it's wonderful,but my father will think his daughter grew more crazy. the step is: 1,Dilute a cup of egg soup with hot water. 2,Put a kelp which is peculiar to Japan in to the soup. 3,Stir in the kelp vigorously,until it was turned into mushy. this is step. I think it's very delicious,but perhaps other people don't think so.because the kelp has a little fishy smell,Many people dislike the fishy smell.

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The First day: My Morning!

I had gone went to bed at 8 in yesterday evening, and I get got up at about 7:10 in this morning.
I went out at 9 am. What I did in the from 7 am to 8:40 am? They are I washed cloths, bathed and ate breakfast.
I created a new breakfast; I think it's wonderful,but my father will think his daughter is even crazier. grew more crazy.
The steps are is:
1,Dilute a cup of egg soup with in hot water.
2,Put a kelp, which is peculiar to Japan, in to the soup.
3,Stir in the kelp vigorously,until it was turned into mushy.
this is These are the steps.
I think it's very delicious, but, perhaps, other people don't think so.because The kelp has a little fishy smell, and many people dislike the fishy smell.

 

 

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The First day: My Morning!

I had gone to bed at 8 in yesterday evening/last night, and I get got up at as usual about 7:10 in this morning.

(you can say 'had gone to bed' - but it is usual and simpler to say 'went to bed'; it is not easy to explain the 'had gone' grammar! but it implies to me that last night was ot your usual practice)
 

I went out at 9 am; what I did in the had I done from  7 to 8:40 am? (note the way a question changes the word order) They are I washed cloths, bathed, and ate breakfast.
I created/invented a new breakfast dish/food, I think it's wonderful, but my father will think his daughter grew is becoming even more crazy crazier.
The steps are is:
1, Dilute Dissolve/Mix a cup of egg-flower soup powder with in hot water.
2, Put a Add some kelp (which is peculiar/unique to Japan) in to the soup.
3, Stir in the kelp vigorously, until it was turned into it turns mushy (yuk!!!! :D actually kelp/seaweed is certainly not uniue to Japan).
these are the  is steps.
I think it's very delicious, but perhaps other people don't
think so, because the kelp has a little slight fishy smell; many people dislike the fishy smell.

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