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I saw two bland person on the bus today. It's the first working day after three days holiday, I saw two bland person on the bus in the morning,a girl and a boy, but they were not total blindness,they can saw a little bit. The girl is beautiful, I think that life is unfair to her.

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I saw two blind people ( careful, bland is a word too, and has a negative tone to it) on the bus today.

It's the first working day after the three-day holiday, and I saw two blind person on the bus in the morning, a girl and a boy; but they were not totally blindness, they could see a little bit. The girl is beautiful, I think that life is unfair to her.

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I saw two blind people on the bus today.

It's the first working day after three days holiday and I saw two blind people on the bus in the morning,a girl and a boy, but they were not totally blindness,they can see a little bit. The girl is beautiful. I think that life is unfair to her.

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I saw two bland people on the bus today.

It's the first working day after three days holiday, today. I saw two bland people on the bus in the morning, a girl and a boy, but they were almost totally blind, only able to see little bit. The girl is beautiful. I think that life is unfair to her.

 

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Today is the first workday after the Moon Festival's three-day holidays, I ran into two almost blind people, a girl and a boy, on the bus this morning. They are not totally blind and they keep a little bit of sight. That girl is pretty, so I think what an unfair life she has encountered.

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