today program
today i waked up at 6 oclock in the morning, i did execices after i taked shower, i went to the office i get my breakfast and now i'm here to write a note in italki :)
after i will finish my work and go back home at 4:30 pm, i relax a little, after i cook something for dinner ( i love cooking) then i dine while watching tv
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Today program.
[suggestion: My day.]
Today I waked up at 6 am oclock in the morning, after that I did exercises and after that I took shower. I went to the office where I got [suggestion: ate] my breakfast. Now I'm here to write a note at italki :)
After i will finish my work and I will go back to my home, it will be about at 4:30 pm. I will be relaxing a little, after but before that I need to cook something for dinner (I love cooking). And then I will enjoy my dinner while watching tv.
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Today's Program
Today I woke up at 6 o'clock in the morning, I did execices after I took shower, I went to the office I had my breakfast and now I'm here to write a note on italki :)
When I'll finish my work, I'll go back home at 4:30 pm, I'll relax a little, after I finish cooking something for dinner ( i love cooking) then I'll dine while watching Tv.
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Today's Program
Today, I woke up at six oclock in the morning. I did some exercises after i taking a shower, then I went to my office, i got some breakfast and now I'm here to writing a note on italki. :)
After I will finish my work and go back home at 4:30 pm four-thirty, I plan to relax a little, after which I shall cook something for dinner (I love cooking) then i dine while watching TV.
Good effort. Telling time in English needs a little bit of attention - we have about three basic styles, and the important thing is to choose one and stay with that style. For example, writing o'clock then am/pm is a mistake. You've confused the styles (and distracted the reader).
I'm a little shocked at the number of errors in other members' "corrections". This text was not difficult to correct.
Feel free to ask about any corrections I've made.
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today's program
today i woke up at 6 oclock in the morning, i did my execices and after took a shower, i went to the office, i got my breakfast and now i'm here to write a note on italki :)
after i will finish my work and go back home at 4:30 pm, i will relax a little, after i will cook something for dinner ( i love cooking) i will dine while watching tv
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